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The Missing Part of StickGirl's Transformation

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Waterbreath

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Madoka KanameMadoka KanameSailor MoonSailor MoonCutie HoneyCutie HoneyHoney KisaragiHoney KisaragiStickmanStickmanWhatIf ChanWhatIf ChanWaterboyWaterboyStickGirlStickGirlTrouble-senseiTrouble-senseiStickGirl (Magical Girl Form)StickGirl (Magical Girl Form)
Stickman

Stickman

Waterboy? What are you doing here?

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Characters in this story

  • Madoka Kaname — Madoka Kaname is one of the five main Magical Girls and the main titular protagonist of Puella Magi Madoka☆Magica anime and manga series. She's a second-year student at Mitakihara Middle School and is in the same class as Sayaka and Homura, as well as Kyoko in The Rebellion Story.
  • Sailor Moon
  • Cutie Honey
  • Honey Kisaragi
  • Stickman — just a comedic stickman or perhaps more than that to some...
  • WhatIf Chan
  • Waterboy — The kusogaki version of me.
  • StickGirl — A Shy Female Stickman Who also has a crush on Stickman
  • Trouble-sensei — Trouble-sensei is based on a forgotten secondary character from the To Love-Ru series called Professor Takahashi (高橋). He received the nickname Trouble because that word is his catchphrase; he is a comically serious man who is always widening his eyes in anger and pouting.
  • StickGirl (Magical Girl Form) — "Let's do this!" StickGirl in her Magical Girl form
Story transcript

Stickman: Waterboy? What are you doing here?

Waterboy: Clapping for a certified magical-girl success story!

StickGirl (Magical Girl Form): A-ah... thanks?

Waterboy: Seriously, StickGirl. You nailed the form.

Stickman: See? I knew you could do it.

StickGirl (Magical Girl Form): I-I did...

Waterboy: But you both forgot something VERY IMPORTANT.

Stickman: What did we forget?

StickGirl (Magical Girl Form): W-what?

Waterboy: The classic naked mid-transformation beat before the magical girl outfit finishes forming!

Stickman: That is not a requirement!

StickGirl (Magical Girl Form): W-we are NOT adding that!

Trouble-sensei: Waterboy is correct. It IS essential.

Waterboy: HA! I knew it!

Stickman: Why are you here?!

Trouble-sensei: Observe the archetypal mahou shoujo naked mid-transformation sequence pioneered by mangaka Go Nagai: Honey Kisaragi's transformation into Cutie Honey.

Waterboy: See? Nude body, radiant silhouette, costume forming, heroic pose. The whole package!

Waterboy: Nagai-sensei's version and the anime are far more lewd than this though... Damn you WhatIF TOS!

Trouble-sensei: And the sequence becomes routine.

Honey Kisaragi: After a while, you barely think about it.

Waterboy: And it didn't stop with Cutie Honey!

Trouble-sensei: Usagi Tsukino and Madoka Kaname both inherit the same visual language in Sailor Moon and Madoka Magica.

Stickman: Why is this a live demonstration now?

StickGirl (Magical Girl Form): I am leaving.

Sailor Moon: You get used to the sequence.

Madoka Kaname: It's a little embarrassing, but... yes.

Stickman: Her transformation worked perfectly without it!

StickGirl (Magical Girl Form): Exactly!

Waterboy: Incomplete data.

Trouble-sensei: Retest required.

Waterboy: Round two! We are correcting history!

Stickman: NO, WE ARE NOT!

StickGirl (Magical Girl Form): W-Waterboy!

Trouble-sensei: Begin the retest.

StickGirl (Magical Girl Form): S-Stickman? Are they telling the truth? Is that really standard for magical girl transformations?

Stickman: ...

Waterboy: Well?

Trouble-sensei: Answer the question.

WhatIf Chan: Sigh... yes. They are indeed correct.

WhatIf Chan: Hold on. Madoka is here?

Madoka Kaname: Um... hi?

Waterboy: By the way, WhatIf Chan! JD still hasn't watched Madoka Magica yet! I've got the screenshots as the receipts to prove it!

WhatIf Chan: Dad, the new movie's out now! If you don't watch Madoka right now, I will personally bring Waterboy over to our house to kick you in the crotch again!

Stickman: She doesn't need that trope!

StickGirl (Magical Girl Form): Exactly! My form works perfectly without it!

Waterboy: You sure about that? Because I recorded the whole transformation. Millisecond by millisecond.

WhatIf Chan: Waterboy, you did not.

Waterboy: Oh yes I did! Lets find out if that mid-transformation sequence is hidden in this footage, shall we?

StickGirl (Magical Girl Form): W-wait! You actually have the footage?!

Stickman: GIVE ME THAT CAMERA!

Madoka Kaname: Is this normal?

StickGirl (Magical Girl Form): I-I can't stop blushing!

Waterboy: Catch me first, loser! HAHAHAHAHA!

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