Train Ride of Eternal Shame

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Tomoko: Nobody can see me playing this on the train… just one more CG and—

Asuka: Good morning, Kuroki-chan! Your hair's sticking up like a—

Tomoko: D-DON'T LOOK!

Asuka: OW!

Tomoko: OW!

Phone speaker: Senpai… I can't hold back any—

Noko: Antler caught, but I'm oka—

Random commuter: Those boys on the screen were about to—

Tomoko: They've seen everything. My life is officially over… again.

Asuka: Um, Kuroki-chan… your phone's still broadcasting.

Tomoko: Volume down, volume down, VOLUME DOWN—

Asuka: Let me just—oh no, I think I opened something else!

Tomoko: NOT THE GALLERY!

Noko: Sorry! My antlers have a mind of the—

Tomoko: I-it's research for my future career in game design…!

Tomoko: My life is a visual novel with only bad endings…

Asuka: Kuroki-chan, your 'research' is very… thorough!

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