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The unpresent person

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Dominans

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Closure

Closure

So I ran the numbers on the water recycler. We're losing like 12% efficiency every cycle.

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  • W — A mercenary whose lost everything but hiding her pain with a sadistic and mocking persona.
  • Closure
  • Extra — In the context of general anime and manga, a "Extra" (or mob character) refers to the anonymous background characters and extras that fill the world. The term comes from the English word "mob," meaning a crowd.
Story transcript

Closure: So I ran the numbers on the water recycler. We're losing like 12% efficiency every cycle.

W: Sounds like a you problem.

Closure: Look, if we reroute the backup line through B-deck, it'd fix itself.

W: You say that about everything and then nothing gets rerouted.

Closure: That's because Kal'tsit keeps vetoing my proposals before I even submit them. Somehow.

W: Maybe stop cc'ing the entire command chain on your memos.

Closure: Transparency is a virtue, W.

Closure: The floors creaking a lot lately as well, when was the last time it was reinforced or checked?

W: How the hell should I know? It's not my job. But I'll inform kaltsit I suppose.

Extra: 🩳❓

W: Anyway, what about the training room ventilation? It still smells like wet dog in there.

Closure: That's because it IS a wet dog. Ceobe sleeps in there.

W: Gross. Can't you just lock the door?

Closure: She chewed through the last three locks.

W: ...reinforced steel locks?

Closure: Yep.

W: This ship is falling apart.

Closure: Always has been, until I'm requested to fix it. Not my problem.

Closure: Same time tomorrow?

W: If I'm not deployed, sure.

Extra: 😂