Unredeemable

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Characters in this story

  • Aisha — Aisha spent her childhood reading a book of mage and book of ways of hacker by the time that she enters Magic Academy to training herself to use different types of Magic and Aisha has become a powerful Mage in the world with her hacker skills
  • Yuzuha — Yuzuha is a level 5 esper in Academy City and Yuzuha is the best friends and childhood friends of Hisako and Yuzuha use her power with her electric abilities and Yuzuha skills is green electric shock blast abilities to hit her opponent
  • Shizuka — The landlady of Corona House apartment complex and host of the Fire Dragon Emperor Alunaya
  • Natsumi — Natsumi is the best friends of Hisako and Yuzuha and she has different abilities like green Electric daggers in one of her hand to attack against her enemies Natsumi will help anyone that needs her help
  • Kotoha — Kotoha is a friends of Natsumi and best friends of Yuzuha and Kotoha abilities are created purple Electric Sword and knife blade and purple flame abilities attack and Kotoha does watching over Akari young brother Cinder when Akari is away
  • Villainess Cinder — Villainess Cinder real name Dark Cinder when Dark Cinder transform into her Villainess Cinder form and Villainess Cinder use her red electric abilities and her weapon is Knife blade with red electric to attack with her one hand
Story transcript

Aisha: There she is... Villainess Cinder.

Villainess Cinder: what do you want Aisha

Aisha: Wait! You don't have to keep going down this path. Let me help you!

Villainess Cinder: why is that you could save me from my Villainess evil path

Villainess Cinder: Redemption? Don't make me laugh. I LIKE being evil. Every single moment of it.

Aisha: I just wanted to save you from your Villainess way and evil path

Villainess Cinder: Try that again... and next time I won't be this gentle.

Aisha: ...Maybe some people really can't be saved. But I'm not giving up yet.

Aisha: maybe it is all my fault to believe that some Villain could change

Shizuka: Aisha...? What happened to you?

Aisha: I was trying to save Villainess Cinder form her Evil path

Natsumi: Aisha, not every villain can be redeemed. Cinder... Dark Aria... after everything they've done to this world

Aisha: I guess you're right about that Natsumi

Aisha: ...I know. I just... I wanted to believe she could change.

Aisha: I just wanted to save Villainess Cinder form her Evil path but I guess I was wrong

Kotoha: You tried your best, Aisha. That's what matters.

Aisha: ...Thank you, Kotoha. All of you.

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