The Mermaid Note Returns (2): Yuni and Toria

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Characters in this story

  • Light Yagami
  • Stickman — just a comedic stickman or perhaps more than that to some...
  • StickBro — "Check out his abs I say! They're stick-hard!" A buff Stickman
  • Yuni — Meet Yuni! The kind “confident” 18 year old girl!
  • Toria — A loving 17 year-old girl who supports Yuni later on in her life.
  • StickGirl — A Shy Female Stickman Who also has a crush on Stickman
Story transcript

StickBro: Alright Stickman, what is this "Mermaid Note" actually DO? I don't know what it does.

Stickman: Okay so basically, you write someone's name in it and BOOM. Mermaid. Instant fish tail, no refunds.

Stickman: Deadpool literally got into this series with Light because he turned Gwenpool into one.

StickBro: ...That's the dumbest superpower I've ever heard of.

Stickman: Pff, tell me about it, blame our creator's past.

Stickman: (wait.. WhatIf... StickGirl got hit by it...?)

Stickman: (No.. I can't.. she's my friend.. I shouldn't...but..)

Stickman: NOPE. Nope nope nope. Moving on.

StickBro: Bro... you were blushing 😏. Were you thinking of StickGirl?

Stickman: S-S-SHUDDUP MAN!

Yuni: Stickman?! Wait... why are there TWO of you now?!

Toria: Wait is that a clone of you, Stickman???

Stickman: Yuni! Toria! Long time no see! (Except for Falling Through Worlds story)

Stickman: And nah, this isn't my clone. Meet StickBro, my protein and muscle obssesed friend.

StickBro: Check out these muscles!

Toria: ...I have so many questions about your friend..

Stickman: Hey quick question. You guys seen a brown-haired dude with a notebook running around turning people into mermaids?

Toria: ...Mermaids? You're joking right? Magic isn't real.

Stickman: Toria.

StickBro: ...

Stickman: We are two literal stickmen. Standing in front of you. Talking.

Toria: ...Oh. Fair point.

Light: Speaking of mermaids...

Yuni: Who are you-

Yuni: W-WHAT HAPPENED TO MY LEGS?!

Toria: I TAKE IT BACK. MAGIC IS VERY REAL! PLEASE UNDO THIS!

Light: Another successful entry! On to the next! You won't catch me puny stickmen, EVER!

Stickman: GET BACK HERE YOU FISH-OBSESSED PSYCHO! NO ONE DOES THAT TO YUNI (and Toria)!

Stickman: (well except WhatIf creators, but who cares?!)

Stickman: We'll catch him! I promise!

StickBro: That guy needs to learn what REAL gains look like, and for once, I don't mean muscles.

Yuni: PLEASE HURRY. I CAN'T FEEL MY KNEES.

The Mermaid Note Returns (2): Yuni and Toria by Anonymous | WhatIf Visual Fanfic · WhatIf