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Create your own story with WhatIf!
Create your own story with WhatIf!
Characters in this story
- Tazuna Hayakawa
- Juan Carlos Bodoque — "this was my green note, i'm Juan Carlos Bodoque"
Story transcript
Tazuna: That mare’s stride is two beats too short—she’s running like she’s afraid of the finish line.
Juan Carlos Bodoque: Chinese Storm, my tempestuous moon… you promised me thunder, yet deliver only drizzle.
Tazuna: Try blindfolding her at the start. If she can’t see the others, she’ll run her own race instead of chasing shadows.
Juan Carlos Bodoque: Blindfold a horse? That’s like asking a poet to write with the lights off.
Tazuna: Trust me—she’ll break late, but when she does, she’ll fly past them all.
Juan Carlos Bodoque: If this works, I’ll name my next losing ticket after you, señorita.
Juan Carlos Bodoque: Put everything on Chinese Storm to show—no, to win—no, both! ¡Vamos, mi tormenta china!
Tazuna: I said small steps, not leap off a cliff…