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The cursor blinks on the forum post. My finger hovers over delete.
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Thirty-seven unread messages. All from strangers. Except one.
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I was going to do it that night.
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Posted my goodbye on the support forum at 3:47 AM.
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412Deathriderx: "Hey, I read your post. I'm 24, survived attempts. Can we talk?"
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We stayed on Discord for 10 hours straight.
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He kept talking while I held the pills in my hand.
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That was 200 days ago. Haven't missed our daily check-ins since.
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I owe everything to Tyler. without him, God knows where I would be at right now
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But... he's not supposed to visit until next month...
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You came early... the crane, it's...
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There's writing inside... hospital discharge papers?
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Tyler Moxley, Room 417... cardiac unit... this is dated yesterday...
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Straight to voicemail. He's never not answered before.
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But I saw him... I swear I saw him standing right there...
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The bracelet... it's real. But whose hand was holding the crane?
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New message: "Kaito, this is Tyler's sister. We need to talk. - Nicole"
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Nicole's text glows on screen. My thumb hovers. Tyler's sister never calls unless...
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Nicole's calling. Why is Nicole calling—
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Hello?
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Tyler...? But the papers said... how are you—
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The line crackles. His voice sounds wrong—like he's speaking through water.
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Hello? HELLO?!
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But I heard him. I swear I heard his voice...
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Nicole: "Kaito, Tyler passed this morning. His phone was with us the whole time. How did you get a call from his number?"
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The mirror... it's breathing. Like water catching sunlight.
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This can't be real. Mirrors don't ripple. People don't walk through them.
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I promised I'd come early, didn't I?
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His hand is ice, but solid. Real. The plastic bracelet reads Room 417.
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You're supposed to be— Nicole said you were—
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Every promise has a price, Kaito. Yours was living. Mine was visiting.
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The floor is wet. Not from snow. From the mirror. From me.
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The crane. He took it with him. The last piece of Tyler I'll ever hold.